City January 4, 2010 8:52 AM

Buffalo Lockjaw: Fiction Fosters Stereotype

Buffalo Lockjaw: Fiction Fosters Stereotype

"Buffalo Lockjaw" is the latest book by author Greg Ames. He grew up in Buffalo and currently lives in Brooklyn, New York.  The book received many positive reviews and is said to provide a vivid sense of place.  As it is set in the author's hometown, that place would be Buffalo.  

The book cover, which is very beautiful graphically, gives a good idea about how the author will be setting up that sense of place.  It is composed of a roughly stenciled title centered over a pair of images that seamlessly blend into one image.  It moves from a cold frothy beer at the bottom which morphs into a center band of pure white (white-out) to a typical Buffalo street covered in thick new blanket of snow.  According to reviews "...love of one's family and love of one's hometown mix powerfully". Could have fooled me!

The author describes "buffalo lockjaw" as a term used to describe the tightly clenched jaw of Buffalonians as they walk through the wind-wiped, snow-blinded streets. Oh really? I have never heard this term, but he makes it sound like a commonly used phrase, as if this condition of braving the cold is so ingrained in the Buffalo populace that it has spawned a slang term.  As if Buffalo is the only cold snowy city.  This and the cover tell you pretty much all you need to know about Ames' treatment of Buffalo.  I would not call it love. 

The book is an interesting telling of a son's thoughts on facing the terminal illness and eventual death of his mother at a relatively young age.  If you have seen the movie "The Savages," that was recently filmed in Buffalo, you have basically seen the movie version of this book with a few variations in character.  It is easy to use Buffalo for this plot because it is pretty much universally known as faded, forgotten old place that fits its stereo type well in the national psyche.  

Ames could not resist using the "snow card" in every situation with the slightest opening to pound home the point that Buffalo is cold and snowy.  I understand what he is doing--placing death and aging in a cold winter-wrapped place.  But, after being beaten over the head with how cold, snowy, and decayed Buffalo is, chapter after chapter after chapter, the metaphor gets a bit tired.  One extra bothersome example (from the first page of a chapter called "Merriment") was this: "The decaying mansions on Delaware are imposing hulks, some unlit and unheated, sitting in the darkness three hundred feet from the curb, evidence of Buffalo's Glorious past..." it goes on to describe Buffalo's fall from grace.  I rack my brain trying to think of any abandoned unheated mansions on Delaware.  While a few of them could use some maintenance, I would hardly describe the street as a place of decay in general, quite the opposite actually.

Sure, fiction authors need to take artistic license to make the story flow.  Unfortunately for Buffalo, that means exaggerations that feed the general stereotype of a dead city with no future. Delaware Avenue is an amazing street--not just by Buffalo standards, but also by national standards.  This kind of artistic license hardly fits with the author's supposed love of hometown and does no favors to Buffalo.  

To pile on, all the local characters in the book are either old, brainless partiers, somewhat dim-witted, or possibly mentally unstable artists.  Apparently sophisticated, normal, highly educated, and highly motivated people need not apply for a life in Buffalo. I have never been an apologist for Buffalo's weather and, as a matter of fact, I cheer on the much overdue winter festival this year.  But this book just stuck in my craw; it deals with family tragedy and the finite nature of life in an interesting way, but gives Buffalo a good punch in the face along the way.  So check it out if you dare.  It is a quick read. It won't waste too much of your time. 

Next up for me is "Buffalo Gal" by another Buffalo expat named Laura Pederson.  The first chapter is called "God's Frozen People" and the cover is--you guessed it--a winter scene.  Ugh! My brain hurts already.

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This morning, I've already seen a handful of stories on cable news about the snowy Buffalo Bills game yesterday. Buffalo may never shake this snow stereotype.

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Why should it? It snows. Big deal. Is anyone in Moscow fretting about their snowy cold stereotype? I rest my case. And it scarcely surprises me that a novel written by an expat is rife with negative depictions of the place they left behind. Poor Greg Ames: so misunderstood by the folks at home. Wait til he gets knifed walking from his luxury ondo in Williamsburg to the 6th Ave L Train. There won't be a city of neighbors there to help him.

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I understand what you are saying STEEL, the stereotypes are overplayed. The problem that I see is not the fact that there are news reports about snow in Buffalo, the problem is that this is typically all anyone hears about the city. We don't do nearly enough to promote Buffalo and all the good things that our city has to offer. To many people, the image of Buffalo is snow, because that is what is offered on the news, that is what they see when they watch the Bills three times a year, and that is what they read about in books. You do a good job of pointing this out.

The question is, what image should we be selling? If someone where to write a book about Buffalo, how should they paint the scenery? How should they describe the people and the places? How would you describe a place like the Central Terminal, if you were to use that as the backdrop of a story?

I would love to know how we should be selling Buffalo. Maybe Dottie Gallagher-Cohen and Ed Healy could help us with this one. What is the image of Buffalo that we should be using when we market ourselves? What should we highlight and how should we portray some of the more obvious characteristics of the city like blight, vacancy, and poverty?

The image the author used to describe Delaware may not fit, but go a few blocks east for a drive down Main Street and the image is spot on.

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Snowy Buffalo is a reality. We live in a harsh climate, so let's face it. Though it might be glorious in the summertime, it's just as glorious in most of the country in the summertime. We can't sell ourselves as a sunny/warm place, because we already have Miami and San Diego. What truly makes us stand apart from the rest of the US, in terms of weather, is the weather patterns attributed to being on the shores of the Great Lakes, and yes, that includes a lot of snow and gray skies and amazing stroms for a lot of time out of the year. We have already seen articles on BR recently about how much we love our snow and our weather. And the truth is that many people love our weather, and a lot of people hate it. And there's not a lot we can do about that aside from the attitude we apply in its regard.

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We don't live in that harsh of a climate. We didn't even get actual snow that stays around until January this year. December was mild and relatively warm. I would consider a climate like Miami's to be much harsher, where people lose their houses during hurricanes.

At worst, Buffalo has 3 months of "bad" weather (if you're not interested in skiing, sledding, snowmobiling, etc., which many people are). Even then, in reality the snowy days are often interspersed with bright mild days.

I agree with what Steel is saying - not only does this sort of depiction reinforce the bizarre stereotype that Buffalo is cold ALL THE TIME, even in summer, it ignores any possibility that winter can itself be a great season full of visual beauty and opportunities for plenty of fun outdoor activities.

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Call me crazy, but I don't think Buffalo has a harsh climate. We got what, 8-10 inches of snow in the City yesterday. I challenge anyone to find anyplace in the country that had a more beautiful day than we had, it was glorious out.

There are only a small handful of days throughout the year where its really bad to go outside, because of the wind. I'd estimate maybe 5? All year. I imagine there are a lot more days than that that I would never want to go outside if I lived in the south.

If I were the CVB, I'd exploit the hell out of the snow. We're already known for snow - that's not going away. But why not show everybody how f'in great and picturesque it is with the snow. That's not going to work for everybody, but I bet it would work for a lot of people.

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As I read this post there's about 5 inches of caked snow staring at me from the windowsill, and it's rather pretty imho.

But there are a lot of places that get snow, if they are known for something else it's because they've produced something else. Buffalo is known to the rest of the country for the following: snow, the Bills, chicken wings, and dilapidated industry. I would love for this place to be known for being tech and start-up friendly, and historic and preserved views throughout the city — but to sell these we first need to have them.

At least the book cover doesn't have a picture of "Wide Right".

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It is not the fact that Buffalo has snow that is a problem for me. On the contrary I think Buffalo should be celebrating the snow. Buffalo SHOULD have a snow festival that rivals Mardi Gras.

The problem I have is with books like this one that take the lazy path by playing off Buffalo as a one dimensional place. This book reinforces Buffalo's images as a cold dull place. It does no favors for the people of Buffalo.

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Again, the question is, what image should we be selling? If someone where to write a book about Buffalo, how should they paint the scenery? How should they describe the people and the places? How would you describe a place like the Central Terminal, if you were to use that as the backdrop of a story?

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You ask what image should we be selling? This isn't about selling - it's about at least being accurate in your portrayal of the place the story is set in. The misconceptions and stereotypes, according to Steel, are propagated as opposed to debunked. Truths are stretched as opposed to adhered to or explained. Etc. To paint a picture of Delaware Ave. as a dying street rife with the shells of decrepit wealth is, well, not accurate, to say the least. There ARE plenty of dying streets in Buffalo without taking one of the main thoroughfares down with them, fictionally.

If you are going to write about a place or a time, even in a work of fiction, do so accurately. Convey the feel and the tone of the place and time so that it coincides with the fiction and gives it a ring of truth! But don't get lazy or pander to the stereotypes, or, for the love of God, make things worse than they are. It serves no purpose - either in the storytelling, or in the image of the place written about. Tell something...NEW! Find something that hasn't been revealed or isn't known. Give it depth and character. Bring it to life! That is a writer's job.

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So if the author had substituted the experience of driving down Main Street instead of Delaware, it would acceptable?

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Yeah! It would have. OR, he could have written -

"As I drive down Delaware Avenue, besieged on both sides by the remnants of Buffalo's Golden Age - towering mansions built by the robber barons as a testament to themselves, but now relegated to the housing of slip and fall shysters and the omnipresent Red Cross - I am reminded..."

Just as colorful, conveying a similar message, yet still accurate. Right?

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Sounds good to me... throw in CTG and Child and Family Services and you've got a deal. Maybe a shout out to Canisius would be nice too.

Why not write to the author to suggest this edit for his next edition?

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Ah, Jimmy, it ain't my place. In fact, I feel kinda' bad for the criticism I've dished out already. Tain't my place to say it. Just got carried away by the moment.

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I think you might be forgetting last winter when we had a white Thanksgiving, followed by a weekly snow storm that you could almost plot out on your calendar until the middle or end of January. We had a lovely Spring, but a lousy Summer. As I type this, it is 14 degrees outside, and there are places in this country where people would not even go outside when it's that cold. And except for tomorrow when we are expecting a whopping 26 degrees, the temperature will not even reach 20 degrees again for at least the next week to 10 days...or more. You might not consider that harsh, but a lot of people would. Everything is relative, and if people in Buffalo really believe that there are only 3 months of "bad" weather a year here, then that just proves the author's point. We don't even realize how harsh the weather is. People lose their houses in places like Miami due to hurricanes, and people lose their lives here in car accidents on the Thruway due to blizzards. You might think that 90-something humid degrees in Florida is harsh, but that's not what most people think of when they hear "sunny and 90 degrees." They think sandy beaches and fun in the sun with mojitos and margaritas. Like I said before, we've already had this discussion in a prior BR article. Some people revel in cold and snowy conditions, and others hibernate. But let's not kid ourselves into thinking that we don't really get a lot of snow and that lake effect is not a real phenomenon.

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Who said Buffalo didn't get a lot of snow?

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I have had numerous conversations in Chicago where when I say I am from Buffalo the next question from the other person is "Its cold there isn't it?" I don't know how to respond because the inference is that Chicago is not cold or that Buffalo is pretty much the same as the northern fringes of Alaska. I mean the guy is from f-ing Chicago for Christ sake! Later in the week Chicago is due for several inches of snow with highs topping out around 9f. One winter I remember in Chicago there was a stretch of cold where the HIGH temperature never got above Buffalo's lowest ever temperature.

Yes Buffalo is cold and snowy and so what. It is also warm and delightful and most of the population of the USA actually lives in the cold snowy crappy in the winter part of the country.

This book just hits home again and again and again that Buffalo is a cold dead place filled with misfits, dullards, and dying people. Buffalo has worked hard to conjure this image for itself so maybe it was an easy mark for this author.

I wonder if the Home makeover people were disappointed that no snow fell while they were in Buffalo. I bet their 2 hour show has at least one comment on Buffalo's unusually nice weather.

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Nail: Hit on Head.

Buffalo is actually pretty temperate(imo) as far as northern cities go.

The average low temps(F) in few cities for Dec, January and February according to wiki:

Buffalo: 24,18,19
Albany: 20,13,16
Chicago: 19,13,17
Minneapolis: 11,4,12
Cleveland: 25,19,21
Pittsburg: 25,20,21
Boston: 27,22,23

As cold as Buffalonians and people from around the country think it is, it's not actually all that cold here(comparatively).

Boston has the added benefit of being on the ocean and it's still only 4 degrees warmer on average.

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Dear Steel,

London was probably not as bad as Charles Dickens described, either. I think you should have a word with the author. Furthermore, I believe 'The Movable Feast," to be overwhelming in its praise of 1920's Paris. It couldn't have possibly been that interesting.

Also, there are too many States these days, please eliminate three.

Sincerely,

Abraham J. Simpson

P.S. No, I am not a crackpot

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Reg and brown - Well I don't know enough about London to be coming to its defense, but I am pretty sure that London is not the victim of over simplified imagery as is the case with Buffalo. This book was described as being an affectionate look at Buffalo. I am just saying that it is not that in my opinion.

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As a former resident of Naples, Fl(same latitude as Miami), I can tell you that harsh weather is all relative. 90 degrees and sunny isn't really good for the beach just as 2 degrees and wind isn't ideal for skiing. I much prefer our seasons with changes both good and bad. You can't appreciate the nice weather if it is always nice, sounds silly perhaps but I really believe that's true. As for the authors "misrepresentations" of Buffalo, well maybe that's how he viewed it. If you want to offer a different perspective on Buffalo than perhaps someone should write a book about all the great things that Buffalo has to offer including it's four seasons.

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We should embrace our snow. The key to happiness (and maybe even success) is to do what you love and to do it very well and with honor. Snow may be just one of our strengths, but it is no less interesting or special than our other attributes. We Buffalonians should be finding a way to capitalize on--and celebrate--our snowy season. Newell's Powder Keg Festival and the Pond Hockey Tournament are two good examples of this, but there must be a million opportunities out there we haven't yet thought of.

That being said, I felt "Buffalo Lockjaw" wasn't very well written and had a very tepid plot line. It seemed to me that the writer relied heavily on the Buffalo backdrop, knowing that Buffalonianas and ex-pats would buy his book even if no one else did.

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Yeah, OK, you talked me into it. Buffalo's weather is simply gorgeous, and the rest of the country has it all wrong. Have it your way.

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I think you are completely missing the point of everyone challenging the idea that Buffalo has extremely harsh weather or is nothing more than a cold-snowy-dull rust belt city.

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I'm not missing the point. I actualy agree with the idea that we deserve our national reputation where the weather and economy are concerned. We do have a lot of what I (and apparently most of the US) consider to be bad weather, and our local economy has been in decline for decades. We have serious problems with all branches and most departments of our government, including our school system. One in three adults in Buffalo is functionally illiterate. That last fact (yes, fact) manifests itself in several aspects of our local culture. Does it make this a bad place to live? Not necessarily. But it's certainly NOT for everyone. I'm OK with that.

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I agree that Buffalo hardly has the harshest weather in the country. I could never survive living in the plains, Dakota's, or the midwest. My mother lived in Minnesota for a couple years and came back because she could not take the winters there. Scary negative windchill's were the norm and schools were hardly closed because of them, like they are here. Yet the national media doesn't portray the plains or midwest as this tundra-ice covered place... yet Buffalo is in the national spot light every time we get snow. I think one of the biggest problems with Buffalo is that our local media buys into the stereotype so much.

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I think Buffalo's snow image is tied into the city's economic outlook. Cold cities such as Minneapolis, Boston and Denver never receive the harsh weather treatment like we do because...things are OK in their towns due to the economy. In Buffalo, it appears that we suffer from a double-whammy, thus snow is bad.

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Steel, I read Buffalo Gal and it left me feeling pretty much the same as you did with Lockjaw. Thanks for your comments; I think I'll skip this one.

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Couldn't we just tell people it's not really snow, rather just nose candy. I think we might have a massive influx of population rather quickly. BTW: it is freezing outside.

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Isn't usually about perception rather than reality? I would think that any portrayal of Buffalo that is counter to its reputation would not have much credibility. Call it poetic license on the author's part, but if you would like to take a sad song and make it better, Buffalo's stereotype is ideal.

Those of us who contribute to this forum tend to champion the city. We know of the places to celebrate, the spots off the beaten path, and the diamonds in the ruff. But, let's be honest. Much of what is visible (especially the east side and the former industrial areas) is unappealing to those in the dark. The extensive poverty shows in the environment and on the people. Can we call that black snow that lingers attractive?

Slings and arrows anticipated.

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good god people. it doesn't matter what the reality of buffalo winters are. an author has no responsibility to the people of this town to make them feel good about where they live. take the story for what it is and don't take it so personally.

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Thank you! It's a novel, not an advertisement. Goddamn.

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I know some x-WNY'rs who migrated to AZ. They'd call in January, bragging about their temperatures, which were usually in the 70's.

It never occurred to me to return the favor say in June, when their hands were seared by contact with steering wheels and ignition switches while driving their cars across asphalt pavement which is about 135 degrees at ground level.

Look - weather - good or bad - is what you make of it. No municipality has a lock on the absolute best - or worst weather conditions.

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I actually went out, bought this book, and read a great deal of it today. So far, I think it is fair to the people of the city and even insightful. Too soon to tell, but he has his finger on the pulse of the people.

In my own experience, I can tell you that I can spot a Buffalonian in an instant no matter where I am. And, it is more than just hearing that special accent that is unique to Erie and Southern Niagara Counties. I don't know about others, but if you have been away from the region for an extended length of time like I was, I could identify people from across a cruise ship, in an airport, or even a grocery store six aisles away sight unseen.

Seems that this author has captured much more than the snow stereotype in this novel. He has caught and can convey part of the spirit.

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Sounds like a poor attempt from a NYC transplant to justify his move from his hometown. I'm from NYC, I've heard it a thousand times before -- he's in Brooklyn because they "get him" there, along with every other tragically pretentious twit that relocates to the city.

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Word. Another useless hipster thinks he's written The Great American Novel...between mojitos at Bembe and riding his fixie to the kickball game. Douchebag.

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Brooklyn and Buffalo have a great deal in common. Of all the boroughs, they have the most in common. I can justify that in that I also lived there in a pursuit of something better as well as opportunity. However in my limited experience in the city The temperament is most closely akin to our city. Queens architecturally resembles Buffalo the most, but it is more expensive, Manhattan is too pricey. So, it never strikes me in the least sense that Brooklyn is the area we hear about the most in terms of where our people tend to locate. Frankly, I like it even though there is no place like home. What it does have are decent jobs for those who would have no choice other than the few manufacturing jobs here that are so dead end now that unions have been rendered ineffective. And, like many, I did not stay.

I amy be wrong, but it appears that "family" is what draws them home.

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There's a war going on in Afghanistan. Just saying. In case anyone forgot. 4-73 CAV. A, ATW

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Just going on record at this late date that I enjoyed the book. It may have been too graphic in its depiction of the city to suit some people, but I was able to navigate my way thru the locales by the author's great descriptions of places around the city.

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